All About Me Hi, my name is Justin and I go to Saticoy School. I am 10 years old and I have 5 people in my family and two pets. I have my mom, my dad, my two sisters, and my cat and dog. My mom’s name is Tara, my dad’s name is John, and my two sisters’ names are Shawna and Shannon. My golden Labrador Retriever's name is Gibson, and my black and grey cat's name is Rocky.
What I like to do once and a while, is to either read or go ride my bike. I enjoy reading in my room where it is really quet and so I can consantrate on my book . I ride my bike with my friend Peyton and Nico. And my other best friends are Jovan Mark Gavin and I cant really name them all. And I really like spending time with my Family. My personal goals are playing on a collage football team. I want to play for Michigan univarsity. My Academec goals are reading and science. The sports I play are football and baseball, but I like football better, because I like to tackle people, and I like my positions. My positions are linebacker and fullback. As mentioned, I also play baseball. I play first base and short stop for my Allstar team. which is a team here in Ventura.
Now let me tell you a little bit more about my hobbies. I really like learning to write stories on the computer at school. Our class is learning about a lot of animals. I enjoy it because it is really interesting. I have never been in a class that looks like a menagerie! It feels like I am entering a zoo every time I go to my classroom. My favorite class pet is the Tiger Oscar because of the brilliant orange and black patterns on its laterally compressed body. The fish reminds me of a tiger because of the colors and the stripes. The colors are orange and black. If the Tiger Oscar eats a lot it can get really big. Then it can scare other predditors away In conclusion, these are the things that describe me the most.
other pretitors away. And that is what I learned about the Tiger Oscar. Now Im going to be talking about
Next, let's talk about my goals. Reader Feedback
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All About Me
Hi, my name is Justin and I go to Saticoy School. I am 10 years old and I have 5 people in my family and two pets. I have my mom, my dad, my two sisters, and my cat and dog. My mom’s name is Tara, my dad’s name is John, and my two sisters’ names are Shawna and Shannon. My golden Labrador Retriever's name is Gibson, and my black and grey cat's name is Rocky.
What I like to do once and a while, is to either read or go ride my bike. I enjoy reading in my room where it is really quet and so I can consantrate on my book . I ride my bike with my friend Peyton and Nico. And my other best friends are Jovan Mark Gavin and I cant really name them all. And I really like spending time with my Family. My personal goals are playing on a collage football team. I want to play for Michigan univarsity. My Academec goals are reading and science. The sports I play are football and baseball, but I like football better, because I like to tackle people, and I like my positions. My positions are linebacker and fullback. As mentioned, I also play baseball. I play first base and short stop for my Allstar team. which is a team here in Ventura.
Now let me tell you a little bit more about my hobbies. I really like learning to write stories on the computer at school. Our class is learning about a lot of animals. I enjoy it because it is really interesting. I have never been in a class that looks like a menagerie! It feels like I am entering a zoo every time I go to my classroom. My favorite class pet is the Tiger Oscar because of the brilliant orange and black patterns on its laterally compressed body. The fish reminds me of a tiger because of the colors and the stripes. The colors are orange and black. If the Tiger Oscar eats a lot it can get really big. Then it can scare other predditors away
In conclusion, these are the things that describe me the most.
other pretitors away. And that is what I learned about the Tiger Oscar. Now Im going to be talking about
Next, let's talk about my goals.
Reader Feedback
Students: Give positive feedback/constructive criticism here!
For example,
I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib